4PlayerPodcast: Travis Whispers

Monday, February 16, 2009

Brad should stop critiquing people on their writing skills....

supahkeith said...: The pwnage is strong with this one.; February 16, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Ben Alford said...: Says the guy who presses enter after every line. >.>; February 16, 2009 at 2:48 PM
Snowie Owl said...: And brad kills the forum... I can't get in. o.O =(; February 16, 2009 at 2:59 PM
yurodivoy said...: But Travis, how will you improve unless you accept the constructive criticism of your elders? :P

Seriously though, I was impressed by that writing drabble you showed us on visimicus about the schoolboy and his hidden genius. I think Brad was just suggesting that you might want to proofread your bigger posts, like the Koi Kaze one, which my friend described perfectly as "sometimes soaring, sometimes stumbling". You do encompass some rather profound content when you write, you just ought to try and finish your sentences and join them to each other in a more sensible manner. You have the ability to be a wonderful and surprising writer.; February 16, 2009 at 5:13 PM
Seisan said...: Yeah, Travis. No offense, but do try to not hit enter after every other word in chat. You're still awesome though!; February 16, 2009 at 7:20 PM
Travis said...: For your information, I do it on purpose...
bah hambug; February 16, 2009 at 8:28 PM
Tchuwib said...: is it a wishper blog or a bashing blog XD; February 16, 2009 at 9:36 PM

Monday, February 16, 2009